To what extent did social and economic factors encourage the demand for democratic reform in one state?

 From the May 2017 DP HISTORY Paper 2 exam

Written under exam conditions by a student who ended up receiving a 7 in the course.

To what extent did social and economic factors encourage the demand for democratic reform in one state?








Actual example of exam essay marked and commented on by the examiner; this essay received a generous  6/15 from the IBO: